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What make human different then other animals.

SUCCESS CRITERIA -

• I will begin my story in an interesting way.
• I will use my five senses to give a better description of  the setting and the characters.
• I will use showing not telling sentences to help the readers draw a picture in their minds.
• I will use figurative language to make my story more interesting
• I will re-read my story to make sure it makes sense.
• I will use my success criteria as a checklist.

It was a hot summer day where a man named max meet a monkey at the zoo. Him and his friend sam were both looking at the monkey thinking about what food should It eat at night. They thought of something that was yellow and bright and It was a banana. The monkey was really hungry It wanted some banana from max and sam. But sam was no longer giving the banana to the monkey while he was hungry.

When sam and max gave the banana to the monkey the monkey started jumping onto sam and max while they were runing away.but when max and sam were really scared to explain why the monkey started chace them. But the monkey was really fast when he want the banana.

Sam and max explain how the monkey got out of Its cage. But sam and max made a face that the monkey would follow them back where it came from until they gave the banana back to the monkey. Suddenly the monkey felt sad when he wanted the banana and how he felt by leaving the zoo with them at night.

When monkeys turn into human they have a really sence of humer and selling other food like human and nature food like bananas and apples. But some like us are really different then other people.