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Thursday 17 August 2017

WALT-write a narrative story.

WALT-write a narrative story.

Success Criteria:

- I must use adjectives and adverbs effectively.
- I can follow the structure of a narrative.
- I can edit my writing very well.

Title: Garden Adventure.


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It was a pitch black night and these two sisters were walking sadly along the footpath. The two sisters strolled to see if they could find their way back home. As they were walking, they couldn’t see a thing because it was very dark. Until a few moments later, they spotted a light, which was extremely bright.

As it was pitch black the light came down as if It was going to shine the light to the two sisters. But sadly as the two sisters still walking on the footpath. When the two sisters touched the light they started playing with It. but later on that evening the light made the two sister eyes go blind. But suddenly the little sister look at her big sister and said to her are you okay. But her sister did not responce to her while she kept looking at the light as long as she can.


But the next day was when the too sisters kept looking at the light to much

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