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Friday 30 June 2017

Information report about matariki..

 Information report about matariki..
             Information writing, choose,plan,hook,headings.

Matariki is surrounded by her six daughter tupu-a-nuku, tupu-a-rangi,waiti,waita,waipuna - a - rangi and Ururangi are the main sisters of the six on earth. stars that starts on may or on june. Just before six sisters and there mother had six daughter that was just like her mother. The six sister from the stars were called matariki and the only thing was the mother named her six daughters for matariki at night when they were all stars from their mother.

Matariki is the mother of six daughters and her self but when matariki was born she grew up the lastb time when her mother was name matariki but the days went past for a few days when her mother was right full star. Matariki has another name for a cluster witch is called the name of
‘‘the eye of  god’’


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             Information writing, choose,plan,hook,headings.

Matariki is surrounded by her six daughter tupu-a-nuku, tupu-a-rangi,waiti,waita,waipuna - a - rangi and Ururangi are the main sisters of the six on earth. stars that starts on may or on june. Just before six sisters and there mother had six daughter that was just like her mother. The six sister from the stars were called matariki and the only thing was the mother named her six daughters for matariki at night when they were all stars from their mother.

Matariki is the mother of six daughters and her self but when matariki was born she grew up the lastb time when her mother was name matariki but the days went past for a few days when her mother was right full star. Matariki has another name for a cluster witch is called the name of
‘‘the eye of  god’’



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Thursday 29 June 2017

shapes of polygons

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story about when I didn't come to school but I stayed in rotorua

Inri Wednesday  28 June 2017

Inri’s story about When I didn’t come to school but I stayed in rotorua.

On sunday morning I got up and  went to rotorua when we stop at rotorua we went to go and other family. When we stop at rotorua me and my two sisters and my cousin had a race to see if someone could get to the car but when we had a race I started to do a flip and landed on my arm but when I moved my leg I was really sore for me to move my legs. but when my brother and my cousin helped me up they told me to jump and started to hop. But when my mum  saw my crying I had to sit by her and making sure if i am okay.

But on the next day I got up and started to talking to my mum I said to my mum what are you doing today and she said to me that she had to go to Opotiki to sart out what was going on with my cousin that lives on a farm. But when me and my  two sister stayed in rotorua we had to take my little sister to the docturs and they had to check her leg if they getting worst or not. But I had to come and see what the docturs had to do with my sister leg.

On the next day my mum and her sister went ot ruatoki to see my other big cousin but when they got there they were talking to my cousin and saying to him if he could let his brother stay at his for the night.  my mum and sister came back  around 4:00 in the morning while I was still sleeping on the bed. But when got up we left rotorua around 7:30 and had to back to auckland to see how my cousin was feeling and my so as my little ness. Just before we came back we had to come back and visit my nefew and my little ness.  

Friday 23 June 2017

Inri Read Theory reading assessment comprehension online Thursday 22 June 2017

Inri Thursday 22 jun 2017
Read Theory reading assessment  comprehension online

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On reading comprehension I have been learning my reading and when I felt going on reading comprehension It was very interesting when i had to challenge myself on reading comprehension. When i went online reading comprehension I have been answering the question and following the words on the line but It wasn’t that easy for me to try and answer the question.


When I went onto the reading comprehension I have been knowing that I have been learning my reading comprehension online and so that i could learn more better than everyone else. But when I tried going onto reading comprehension It felt like when I was doing my reading on a book.  

Explain how to you can make glen innes a better place writing.

Explain how you can make glen innes a better place to live in respect of  environment, housing ,park, and recreation school and so on.

People can explain why they like to change glen innes into a better a place and how. They like to change glen innes around because they want to recreate the town center and make new parks and also new school for the people to live in new zealand but the only thing is they also want the environment of the house so that people know what their trying to build up a new house.

When the people from the environment wants to change glen innes they like to change glen innes around because they would like to have a new schools and also new parks so that people can play on the playground but the people from the environment they want to respect about what they are trying to do and how they feel when they want to change glen innes around but they like to help the people from the environment to change glen innes around and by making different.

The People from the environment they would like to change to other school’s from other place but there are more school all around auckland city but the only thing they like to do is they like to change other schools around but is it possible to change glen innes around the glen innes center by asking the environment people to change the school around and It feels they like to change to the school around.


What kind of people that likes to change the park and also the schools around  that they like to do. People that wants to change the school around they want to make new house and new school for people that has been changing glen innes center and the school around.

Tercet Poem





Rhyme sound
 Tercet
 Picture below of the words:
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How thin is the cloud at night when Its white:
How bright is the moon in sight:
How thin is the moon at night:

The moon is so big at night.
The stars are small at night.
But what does rhyme at night sight.

How long can the moon turn to one side of its sights.

The light of day.
The bright of noon.

Friday 2 June 2017

write about our emotions


          WALT- write a story about your. emotions.

Success Criteria:
- I must have an interetsing story.
- I must use strong vocab in my story.
- I must use show not tell for my story when I am making writing.
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I was home alone in the house watching my favourite t.v. programme and the was called the lord of the rings. When my emotions changed It felt like I was dreaming in a other world but when I had a  feeling my emotion said to me that i have gone to coolest places like new york everywhere in the world.

As I came back my feelings were pretty strong when i went for more adventure when I was dreaming in the future as I was watching my favourite programme on t.v. but as I was watching the lord of the rings and It looks like i was reading a book about the lord of the ring and It was very interesting when I was watching my favourite programme. Just before my favourite programme was about to finish i realized that programme was about to go of but then I think the programme was still going when the t.v. was still on.



Just when i was watching my programme I realized that my favourite programme was about to come on but then I had to go back into my emotions.

The Omaru Creek



               Topic sentence.

In room 7 we have been experiencing a lot of butterflies in the butterflys house were they live. But can you guess witch butterfly comes from well they come from different place but i know a few places were they live and were they come from. But just a few days they come to a different place called butterflies creek and they also get flowers were they carry it on there backs and just then they take it back to butterfly creek were they keep it safe.

1 paragraph

                                 Topic sentence.
2 paragraph.


Just recently my school has been experiencing about Omaru creek. Just before we went there, we made paper boats to make them to sail into the creek. Just before My boat was floating It showed us how the boat was sailing and were did it go to. Just before we went down to the creek we took room 8 with us to see Omaru creek so they can have a look.

history of tattoos.

WALT:write an explanation about the history of tattoos and Its significance to my Culture.

Success Criteria:

I must have neat and tidy paragraphs.
I must use expsesnsive vocab and adjective.
My story should include an show not tell.
I must use an explanation about the history of tattoo.
I must us the strong vocabs for show not tell.

Tattoo is one of different kind of pictures that people want on their bodies when a tattoo is diffcult but the tattoo of a ta moko. But the ta moko was represent by his people and the reason why he chose the ta moko was because he made the only maori tribe that could make his people believe in him. But in the professional why of having the tattoo the maori chief has been making a chance and by making an honur of being the tribe for hyis people.

The people that had the tattoo they made something out of It but The tattoo that the chief had aroung his neck he was the only chief that had the  tattoo of the ta moko around his neck and his face.but in 1999 the chief and his friend did the tattoo together in the same way but different way as the chief and the maori queen were brought up together they were best friend when they were little.


Just before the chief was the king for the ta moko he was really honord to have the maori people on his side and no one elsa the chief was asking maori queen if she could be the honor of the tattoo that was made by the ta moko from him self.

Explanation what can we change glen innes around.

Explanation.

What can we change glen innes into a better place.

  1. We can glen innes while It has been dirty.
  2. We can give glen innes a help around the area just before we can change It differently.
  3. We would need some more help so we can take the rubbish out of the stream.
  4. We can help the poor people giving them a house a job and a also a car.
  5. We can decide what the people can do when they have a house.
  6. We can make the stream more better and healthier when the stream smells like bad fish.
  7. What can glen innes change into when housing new zealand is changing.
  8. What can we do to do the main thing about glen innes.
  9. Forever we can help glen innes center change the hole place and starting to make a new place.
  10. What else can we do to help glen innes center change the place around.
  11. We need more people to help around glen innes center to stay strong and healthy.
  12. More people are starting to have no food no shelter and no home to live in but they also have no water to drink so they go into somebody's house and they start living without permission.
  13. Their are many people that are not having more water food and also shelter so that they can keep them safe.
  14. What people need they need some respect when they need to go in somebody else place in the house.

By inri