writing a paragraph

Name: Inri 14 March 2016.

WALT :  write a paragraph.

Room 7 is a creative class. And when you walk into their class, you will see the students’ work and art on the wall. Room 7 has a lot of decorative things and everything is new. Looking around in the class feels like I am in a beautiful colorful place. I like Room 7, they have imagination.

KEY:

topic sentence.

Detail sentences.

Concluding sentence.

WALT: write a paragraph.

Room 7 paragarph.

In room 7 we are getting messier and dirtyer.When room 7 looked at the ground we knew that the ground is full rubbish everywhere. We heard that their was a lot of rubbish on the ground. Room 7 looked outside they know that were responcable to pick up the rubbish so It doesn’t have to be a mess by picking up the rubbish. And just before when room 7 was picking up the rubbish outside on the field.

Just before Room 7 and Room