Writing Assessment

   We can help Omaru creek while their is rubbish that has not been taken out. Some people can be dissrespectful when they end up putting their rubbish in the creek. People that is very often do bad stuff like putting the rubbish in the creek, putting dead animals in the creek, and also putting people in dirty creek. Sometimes  people put their rubbish in the bin and some can but it into the drain.

When people starts putting their rubbish in the creek they like to know why they have putted the rubbish in the creek while It has been dirty. But we need to be responsible for cleaning the creek and taking out the rubbish from the creek. But what people didn’t do they like to think that the creek is the rubbish and also they like to dump their rubbish in the creek.

So for our school we went down to have a look at Omaru creek and I was fun. But just as soon we got their we were responsible for cleaning the creek and also we didn’t know that the boats could sail from one side to the other side. And when just before we looking at the creek we could tell that their was a lot of rubbish in the creek and we also could if known that their was a lot of rubbish. And we tried to get all of the rubbish out creek and making It clean by taking the rubbish the creek. But when their is a lot of rubbish in the creek we like to help out what we can find in the creek and what lives in the creek and suddenly we kept the creek and healthy. But what we can find in the is what we know about Omaru creek. And we to keep Omaru creek clean but not dirty and we can keep Omaru creek when IT is dirty but we can try and keep the creek clean and stay healthy. But when the creek is dirty people like to put their rubbish in the creek so they like It dirty and weird like a terrible  creek. But we can help the creek by taking the rubbish out.